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He slammed the door and dragged a filing cabinet against it. Neither did much to diminish the screams.

“He sacrificed himself to save us from the raptors.” Her voice was little more than a whisper. “We didn’t even know his name.”

“Deinonychus.”

“Now is not the time!” she snapped.

He shook his head as if to wake himself up. “We need to keep moving before they find a way in here.”

“But if we keep heading that way, we’ll be heading towards the zombies.”

“We can outrun zombies, we can’t outrun the deinonychus.”

“Damn, I’m glad I wore flats today.”

Date: 2011-02-04 12:32 am (UTC)
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*snickers more*
*editorially points out that "damn" probably wants a comma after it.*

Date: 2011-02-04 01:02 am (UTC)
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And, I notice... "He sacrificed himself to save us from the raptors[." H]er voice was little more than a whisper. would work a bit better... O:>

Date: 2011-02-04 11:35 am (UTC)
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(Mmmmm, Princess of Nitpicking Essence! Thank you!)

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